6/22 p2
should I use another color — perhaps blue
should I have use blue for the interactions with the red (I don’t have a blue pen —
I only have red because I found a pen) — does it matter which lines are written between
back into
33 sect1 Waiting
remember time of waiting — a poem I wrote waiting for one who never came —
the sounds of the car doors resonant
remember times waiting for Kim to come home
40 sect6 — aspects of my love (is that the proper word)
games of musical chairs — do I remember intentionally losing so as not to have to play any more —
or was I just the clumsiest — the unluckiest — (the lover (the loner))—
or possibly I was just normal at the game — now I would lose intentionally —
actually I wouldn’t get involved — to play the game to not (union business - play - work) — unions — junctions
junctures
punctures
p46 the dream of union from another figure (entire sect2) — politics of unions — different meanings of union 52 1-2
63 8-16 esp14-16 — <?> recollection of talking in N.Y. city bar with Joe Lyons about Iris we both ‘loved’ — her legs growing old — where are these memories coming from
<1988-29 i can still picture the legs — as nice as any i’ve ever seen — legs of a nurse in the hospital overlays — a girl probably the same age as iris 17 years ago>